The 4th Floor Knock
The 4th Floor Knock
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[Page 1]
Panel 1 (Large Panel): High-angle shot of a run-down dormitory near a university. Heavy rain pours down in the gloomy atmosphere, with the entrance light flickering dimly.
Text Box: "Preda Dormitory... a popular budget dorm for college students. But everyone knows the golden rule..."
Panel 2: View from inside the building, looking toward the staircase where an old warning sign is posted.
SFX: Patter... Patter... (Heavy rain)
Text Box: "Rule #1: Never stay on the 4th floor after midnight."
[Page 2]
Panel 1: "Ren," an exhausted student wearing thick glasses, carries a large cardboard box in front of Room 404.
Ren: "(Sighs) I'm lucky to even find a place at this price... Who would actually believe in cheap ghost stories anyway?"
Panel 2: Ren unlocks the door and steps inside. The room is cramped and dusty.
Panel 3: Shot of an old wall clock showing 11:45 PM.
Ren: "Phew... Time to unpack quickly and get some sleep. I have an early class tomorrow."
[Page 3]
Panel 1: Ren focuses on arranging books onto a shelf.
Panel 2: Close-up of the wall clock. The minute and hour hands align straight up at 12:00 AM.
SFX: Tick... Tock...
Panel 3: The room falls dead silent. The rain outside abruptly stops in an unsettling way.
Ren: "Huh... Did the rain really clear up that fast?"
[Page 4]
Panel 1 (Large Panel): A sound comes from the hallway outside the door of Room 404.
SFX: Knock... Knock... Knock...
Panel 2: Ren freezes and turns toward the door in confusion.
Ren: "Who's knocking at this hour? Is it one of the neighbors?"
[Page 5]
Panel 1: Ren walks closer to the door and leans in to look through the peephole.
Panel 2: Peephole view (fisheye lens distortion). The hallway outside is dimly lit and completely empty.
Ren: "Nobody's there... Must be imagining things."
Panel 3: Ren turns back to walk to his bed.
[Page 6]
Panel 1 (Large Panel): The knocking rings out again, but this time, it isn't coming from the door!
SFX: BAM! BAM! BAM!
Panel 2: Ren jumps in shock, spinning around toward the source of the noise.
Ren: "W-Where is that coming from?!"
Panel 3: The knocking sound resonates from right under the floorboards, beneath his feet!
SFX: THUD! THUD! THUD!
[Page 7]
Panel 1: Ren staggers back in terror, sweat pooling on his forehead.
Ren: "Th-The floor below? Why is Room 304 pounding on their ceiling?"
Panel 2: Ren leans down and speaks toward the floorboards.
Ren: "I'm sorry! Am I making too much noise?!"
Panel 3: The knocking stops instantly... Dead silence.
[Page 8]
Panel 1: Ren lets out a long breath and lets out a dry chuckle.
Ren: "Phew... Thought it was a ghost. Just a neighbor getting annoyed."
Panel 2: Ren walks to the wardrobe to grab his pajamas.
Panel 3: As he reaches for a shirt, his phone vibrates.
SFX: Buzz... Buzz...
[Page 9]
Panel 1: Ren checks his phone screen. It's a text from the "Landlady."
Screen Text: "New kid in 404, right? I forgot to mention..."
Panel 2: Ren frowns as he reads the rest of the text.
Screen Text: "The 3rd floor has been closed for renovations—no one's lived there for 3 years. Don't go messing around down there."
Panel 3 (Large Panel): The relief fades from Ren's face instantly. He turns deathly pale, his eyes trembling.
[Page 10]
Panel 1: Ren slowly turns his gaze back to the center of the floor.
Ren: "(Thinking) If the floor below is empty... then who... who was knocking?"
Panel 2 (Large Panel):
SFX: SCRATCHHHHH...
Image: Loud scratching noises echo from directly beneath his bed!
[Page 11]
Panel 1: Ren turns rigid, barely daring to breathe.
Panel 2: He slowly lowers his head to peek into the narrow gap between the bed frame and the floor.
Panel 3: Pitch darkness beneath the bed... Nothing is there.
Ren: "Th-There's nothing..."
[Page 12]
Panel 1: Ren begins to lift his head back up.
Panel 2 (Full Page): A shadowy figure of a woman with long hair dragging on the floor hangs upside down from the ceiling, her face dangling right in front of Ren's!
Shadow Creature: "Looking for... me...?"
[Page 13]
Panel 1 (Large Panel): Extreme close-up of the ghost woman's face—hollow eye sockets and a torn mouth filled with needle-like teeth.
SFX: SCREEEAAAAM! (Ren screaming)
Panel 2: Ren collapses to the floor, scrambling frantically toward the door.
Ren: "Help! Somebody help me!"
[Page 14]
Panel 1: Ren wrenches the door open and sprints out into the 4th-floor hallway.
Panel 2: The hallway is pitch black, with the overhead lights flickering wildly.
SFX: BZZZT... FLICKER... FLICKER...
Panel 3: Ren runs at full speed toward the stairwell.
[Page 15]
Panel 1: Ren dashes down the stairs in a frenzy.
Ren: "Got to reach the 1st floor! Got to get out of here!"
Panel 2: He glances at the floor sign on the stair landing... "4th Floor."
Ren: "Huh? Didn't I just run down from the 4th floor?"
Panel 3: He pushes himself harder, rushing down the next flight of stairs.
[Page 16]
Panel 1: He reaches the next landing. The sign reads... "4th Floor."
Panel 2: He runs down another flight. The sign still reads... "4th Floor."
Ren: "Why... Why can't I reach the 3rd floor?! Am I stuck in a loop?!"
Panel 3 (Large Panel): Knocking sounds erupt simultaneously from all directions around the stairwell.
SFX: KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! THUD! THUD! THUD!
[Page 17]
Panel 1: Ren collapses onto the stairs, completely exhausted and gasping for air.
Ren: "Haa... Haa... I give up... Please just let me go..."
Panel 2: The woman's figure creeps down the stairwell wall at a contorted, unnatural angle, limbs bent unnaturally.
SFX: CRACK... SNAP...
[Page 18]
Panel 1: The ghost stops right before Ren, mere inches away.
Panel 2: She slowly reaches out a skeletal, blood-stained hand toward Ren's face.
Ghost: "Do you know... why... no one stays... after midnight...?"
Panel 3: Ren squeezes his eyes shut in sheer terror, tears streaming down his face.
[Page 19]
Panel 1 (Large Panel): The ghost gently places an index finger against Ren's lips.
Ghost: "Because... it's time to play 'Hide and Seek'..."
Panel 2: The ghost whispers into Ren's ear.
Ghost: "And this time... you're 'IT'..."
Panel 3: The ghost's figure vanishes into the darkness, leaving behind total silence.
[Page 20]
Panel 1: Morning sunlight streams through the stairwell window as birds chirp outside.
Panel 2: The landlady walks up the stairs with an electrician.
Landlady: "Listen, electrician, the lights on the 4th floor are out again... Huh?"
Panel 3: The landlady pauses, looking at the 4th-floor landing. The door to Room 404 sits half-open, with half-unpacked boxes left abandoned inside.
Panel 4 (Final Panel - Cliffhanger): Deep inside the dark wardrobe of Room 404, a pair of blood-red eyes snaps wide open in the shadows...
Ending Caption: "Stay quiet... Don't let the seeker find you..."